10 point outline of story which includes changes

10 point story outline

1.  Opening shot of forest and village. Title 
2.  At entrance of forest, labelled "DO NOT ENTER" "WARNING KEEP OUT" and tape over some of the trees, a girl approaches with a treasure map. looking at it also with warnings plastered over it (even blood stained) there is treasure indicated inside.
3. She goes in the blue and greenish forest (spooky ghost like noises as she goes) and soon comes across a golden mushroom.
4. She takes it and rushes back. Low angle so you can see the greying the area where the mushroom was, then a beasts foot steps in it's place for a split second then goes black.
5. Time has passed and the girl is talking to a salesman who happily buys the mushroom off her and she hungrily takes the money.
6. Through the bushes the beast comes launching out grabbing her and dragging her back to the forest. The man is seen running after them but the beast is FAR too fast.
7. The beast throws her into the spot where she took the mushroom, she look to find a whole section of the forest decaying and ashen, grey and dying, a few moments of shock is across her face before she turns around and the beast attacks her, spilling her blood then another cut to black.
8. As the credits roll you see the man approaching her dead body half buried in the dirt with her hand sticking out, the man looks around in dismay, unsure what to do.
9. The final shot is of him leaving a low angle where the girls head would be and from it a golden mushroom starts to grow.
10. The man in the background turns, with a pause he heads over to it, and the last shot is his hand reaching down to pick it up before it cuts to black.